You are distracted
He said
I was looking away
Out the window into the distance:
A beaver lodge
On top of which stood a Canada goose
Below which
Muskrats silent and sleek
Cut across the swamp
Under clouds drifting and dripping
Into shadows that drenched the hills
With cool and sleepy darkness
Even as the morning light,
A six pointed star,
Was rising from the earth,
Climbing the trees and
Running away with the moon
Without a backward glance
Distracted,
He said.
You are distracted. Again.
Perhaps,
I thought--
Or I am attracted to everything. Everything.
How I would love to
Fall backward
Off this stage
Into the hands of an attractive world
Into a love affair
With every
Single
Little
Thing.
I wouldn't look back.
One Single Impression
28 Comments
Sandy, you always amaze me: what a beautiful poem with great rhythm of verses. And the image well matches the poem.
ReplyDeletewow, is that powerful--words, images, feelings!
ReplyDeleteThat sounds like an amazing walk.
ReplyDeleteThat is one beautiful star sunrise!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your poetry is so vivid! I am not sure I couldn't look back after seeing that photo! But maybe you intended it to mean that there is much more to view with eagerness?
ReplyDeleteMy BYB is finally up. Had a hard time because I couldn't find an appropriate photo that I had taken with my new camera. One day. . .
Ah yes, not so much distracted than attracted.
ReplyDeleteVery good. Beautiful poem too.
A beautiful thought. Distractions CAN sometimes be magical.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful way to capture our dilemmas of distraction. I love this poem! Very nicely done, Sandy!
ReplyDeleteIt is all in one's perception... Attraction, Distraction. Lovely, Sandy.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully portrayed and your usual descriptiveness perfectly capture the pictures in your mind.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely reversal, and new way of seeing things. I love this one, and it makes me think of my kids: so many teachers and therapists trying to teach them how to think like everyone else, instead of wondering what the world looks like from their view.
ReplyDeleteIt might be even better, their way!
Thank you for sharing this, which such a perfectly matched photo too.
What wonderful words and sentiments Sandy. So unique and creative and a great use of this prompt. Bravo Sandy!
ReplyDeleteThis one really touched deeply into me - I love the contrary yet affirming twist on this prompt. Brava, indeed.
ReplyDeleteMe, too, with the rest--I'll fall with you, dear Sandy--there's nothing to look backward to, anyway...
ReplyDeleteThank you squared--
Exquisite. You are so good. Your poems are not just words, they carry the deep truth of the speaker.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful photo and beautiful writings. :) I love your poems. :)
ReplyDeleteSandy, that is simply beautiful. And I can really relate to that feeling of being attracted to everything in the world. It keeps me out of focus most days...D
ReplyDeleteI loved the walk along with you.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully put..
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Compelling piece - strong and thoughtful! Lovely...
ReplyDeleteIts very nice! it is the little things that are important in life because they create all the big things.
ReplyDeleteNeither would I look back. This is beautiful and I love the layers of thought and conversation interlaced.
ReplyDeletewhat a wonderful idea!
ReplyDeletean extraordinary photograph for a wonderful poem -- to be attracted to everything -- Yes!!
ReplyDeletebeautiful sandy!
ReplyDeleteMerry Christmas to you........
Loved this one Sandy. Makes me think of one of my girls-seems I'm constantly reminder her to pay attention in school she is so easily distracted. Maybe she's onto something-she IS taking it all in.
ReplyDeleteWhat an excellent take. I love the thought of being attracted to everything. Well done. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteSimple distractions are the best. I loved
ReplyDelete"A six pointed star,
Was rising from the earth,
Climbing the trees and
Running away with the moon."
Your pictures are stunning!
Hi Sandy, your distractions ended deliciously, if only in your mind! You did the window scene beautifully as well. Thank you.
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I found myself being distracted while I read your poem, distracted by the beauty of your words. I loved it, thank you!
ReplyDeleteThanks for being here.