Saturday, March 10, 2012

One Single Impression: Confirmation

Few voices improve the silence
Like the ospreys'
At sunrise.

They awaken me,
And when I walk toward
Them on my way to the beach

They watch me,

Raise their wings,
Hover above their nest,
Slip into the light,
Slide toward the water,

And glide away from the sun.

Every movement is a note in a song
I cannot hear.

They confirm for me a simple truth:
I was never there.


Viola said...

Very lovely Sandy! :)

Lisa at Greenbow said...

You are there alright. They just aren't paying any attention to you because you aren't a fish.

Lin Floyd said...

captured perfectly...

Cloudia said...

the mystery of your final line\makes the beauty of your poem


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SueAnn said...

Your words are so soothing and serene. I could visualize the bird slipping over the surface of the water.

anthonynorth said...

Wonderful words with a great last line.

kanak7 said...

Really beautiful words, Sandy!

Sandra said...

beautiful awareness...!!

Tarang Sinha said...

Beautiful composition:)

Yogi♪♪♪ said...

Generally I like to look at photographs on the blogs I visit, and the photograph in my head from this post is wonderful.

Harshad mehta said...

When aware, you are there! Confirmed!!

Silence floats with words here.

drieskewrites said...

You paint a beautiful image.

Andy said...

Lovely imagery & flow, but your ending has me intrigued.
Thanks for sharing.

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Mary said...

Word by word, note by note, image by image - you have created a beautiful song.