For walking,
Off road is better,
Always quiet and soft
To the touch,
Grass and earth lift the foot
And whisper in time with each step
Even on a cold morning,
Off road is better.
Always.
On the morning of the first frost
You step deep into a field
(The sign says, "No Trespassing!
Keep Off!" but you are immune
To shouting at this hour.)
You hear only the whisper of grass
And you walk on
And then when you stop
And the sun lifts her head
And blows across the field
Kisses in yellow light
That climb up your body
You feel
Through your sneakers and socks
Moisture that would have been dew
The warm day before.
You imagine you hear the trickle
That is the expired breath of grass
As it soaks through you
And sends you reaching and climbing
Like a wild vine
Into a new day.
One Single Impression
31 Comments
Sandy,
ReplyDeletethis is incredible.
I haven't gone for a walk in a few days and it is killing me. Your words inspire , oh absolutely.
Just Perfect Sandy.
ReplyDeleteSandy I love everything you write. But it is so exceptional! And really beautiful write.
ReplyDeleteThis was simply beautiful. Inspirational.
ReplyDeleteNo one says or writes it better than you, Sandy! This is exquisite and inspirational and I'm ready to deal with my day! Hope you have a beautiful weekend!
ReplyDeleteSylvia
you captured the feeling exactly...we are still 80 degrees during the day, no frost yet...
ReplyDeleteLovely poem, Sandy-it really takes one through that lovely mornig walk breathing the fresh air :)
ReplyDeletewishes,
devika
"kissses in the yellow light" perfection, every line, loved it!
ReplyDeleteHugs my friend, G
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What a vivid picture you painted through your well chosen words!
ReplyDeleteThis is simply beautiful. I really like your feelings on a frosty morning.
ReplyDeleteAs usual, you're brilliant. I love this.
ReplyDeleteI like this poem, I've read it with great pleasure, Sandy.
ReplyDeleteYour words went singing through my heart and lifted my spirits!! Thank you! It has added to an already beautiful day!
ReplyDeleteHugs
SueAnn
yes, mrng. walks sends one reaching & climbing into the day!
ReplyDeleteSo inspirational!
Sandy, your poem is so lovely,
ReplyDeleteso life affirming. You have
captured the blessing that being
in and within Nature can
bring to each of us.
I have been yearning to take a walk through nature lately, just to feel that peace that you so beautifully described in this poem. Gorgeous.
ReplyDeleteVery clecer and nice written Sandy! You are a real poet! :) So "alive" that I felt like I was walking there.. :)
ReplyDeletea better word for my "alive" is vivid, I think.. ;)
ReplyDeleteI felt incredible reading this!
ReplyDeletesombre sobriquets
Lovely write depicting a good morning walk on the grass..so soothing and indeed Sandy..I love reading you..
ReplyDeleteYes, Sandy, this poem makes me want to take a very deep breath and push on through the day, whatever it may hold. What a gift you bring to us!
ReplyDeleteoh Sandy, you took me there, even the rising sun, thank you!
ReplyDeleteTouching nearly every single sense. Impressed !
ReplyDeletePlease have a wonderful new week, and thank you for this much needed escape from here.
daily athens
Wonderfully written work! =)
ReplyDelete-Weasel
This is perfect! I love every word.
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful...all the senses awakened with each verse. Stunning!
ReplyDeleteEach verse is special...Good one
ReplyDeleteI heard that whispering grass just today. Shhhhhh. Yes, I hear the grass calling.
ReplyDeletefabulous flow...
ReplyDeletea magical walk with your words in nature.
your words- true inspiration- I wish I didn't have the knee problems that I do or I would be joining you on your walks...but until I do- your words will suffice. Beautful!
ReplyDeleteoh...I have missed this...so beautiful Sandy...thanks!
ReplyDeleteThanks for being here.