The grind of a jet engine comes to me through the night air
And I wonder how it would be to lie in the grass
Rested and peaceful
And hear that music.
I put it by.
The bark of a lonely dog calling for an open door
Reaches me and I wonder about the loneliness
Unassuming and real
That simply wants in.
I open the door.
The cry of a thirsty child calls to me through the night air
And I wonder how it would be to feel the sunlight
Warm and quiet
In the still water.
I fill her glass.
Each sound comes from a dark and separate place,
And I struggle for the silence that might yield peace
Gentle and still
In a long sleep.
I lie awake.
Now: a whisper--something about love--
But the voice competes
With restlessness
Tonight.
I cannot hear.
I turn the pillow;
I will wait.
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I cannot hear.
I turn the pillow;
I try to sleep.
I cannot sleep;
I cannot make sense
I cannot sleep;
I cannot make sense
Of the whisper.
I will wait.
I will wait.
Light comes.
Tomorrow comes.
The dream comes?
I will arise.
I will wait.
Note: A connection between the image and the words? None. Unfortunately. I began thinking how when I can't settle into sleep, each sound from outside seems to come to me from its own universe and buzz around inside a jar. So I had that thought when I began to write, and then my mind went completely off road.
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37 Comments
Neat! Seems like insomnia strikes people like us. I should try and listen to the sounds when i'm tossing around the next time.
ReplyDeleteInsomnia effects me the same way and your words are perfect whether they match the picture or not -- the picture is perfect on it's on, beautiful! Hope you have a lovely weekend, Sandy!
ReplyDeleteSylvia
This speaks to me, as I wait so often for that quiet nothing that allows my mind to settle down and sleep. So many times sleep doesn't come and I rise early in the day. So well said.
ReplyDeleteI really loved the mood of this poem and following a wandering mind at night. It really resonated with me.
ReplyDeleteLove your poem.
ReplyDeleteLuiz Ramos
I love it. You can take me off road with you anytime.
ReplyDeleteI think you have captured the feeling of insomnia just perfectly. I often hear those sounds. I listen to the clock tic tock, tic tock then the chimes tell me when the quarter hours come by. I even see things in the house with the lights off that looks like this picture of crockery. Wonderful poem. You can be sure you are not alone in the night.
ReplyDeleteI loved this Sandy..
ReplyDeleteI to am a sufferer of sleepless nights.... I now get up and do something around the house.... of visit a few blogs.... it is no good me lying there without sleeping. I know when the weather is warmer and the nights not so long I will be getting up, making a flask of tea and taking off to catch the sun rise. Sleep comes to me often during the day... a hour or two of good deep sleep and I feel refreshed.
May your pillow be as comfy at bedtime as it is in the morning...
Off-roading agrees with you! These words are your independent suspension, Dana 60 front axle and leaf springs...
ReplyDeleteDrive on!
I love to listen to the sounds of the night. We live near trains, both commuter and freight and to me, that's one of the best night sounds when I can't sleep. Happy sleeping!
ReplyDeletelovely thoughts, enjoyed the flow of thoughts that came.
ReplyDeleteYou well describe the voices of night.
ReplyDeleteAloha, Friend!
Comfort Spiral
Nice poem Sandy :)
ReplyDeletewishes,
devika
Wonderful poem, Sandy. I always enjoy so much your very fine poetry. The beautiful picture reminds me of Morandi's paintings.
ReplyDeleteI hear them too. Insomnia can be rough. But you put fine words to it.
ReplyDeleteDue to my 'all nights' shift in the hospital, i am battling with insomnia too.
ReplyDeleteLOve the poem Sandy,it really reverberated with me. Love the photo too, simply perfect for monochrome.
Beautiful! Your poem describes the toss and turn for my restless nights.
ReplyDeleteMaybe your message is in a "bottle?"
ReplyDeleteI could hear a pin drop while reading your words. There was such a silence there; a perfect capturing of that "alone" feeling we all have in the dark at night when unable to sleep. Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteWonderful capture of insomnia-I'm lucky I usually sleep through the night-but when I don't you wrote how I feel. Seems you are always doing that : )
ReplyDeletelovely rhythms and float of images in the almost sleep state, half-urges to respond, then side drift but never quite sleep. great enactment in poetic form.
ReplyDeletenice post Sandy..i could visualise all the words :)loved it :)
ReplyDeleteI think you relayed your feelings perfectly. When I can't sleep my mind flits around and I come up with these most perfect ideas and solutions then I surrender to sleep and when I awake I can't put my finger on my brilliantness of the night before. :(
ReplyDeleteThose faraway sounds are magnified at this time. Nicely done, as always.
ReplyDeleteSandy, I've read this several times. It is my belief that the open state of waiting in the darkness, when no sleep comes, is perhaps a window of/for the sacred.... at least that is what I feel when I read your poem.
ReplyDeleteSandy, even before I read your poem I was thinking of visualzing the filling of those containers, one by one, until sleep came.
ReplyDeleteIt would be similar to counting sheep which I can't do because I can never see any sheep to count.
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sandy...wonderful poem...often i
ReplyDeletefeel the same way...each sound in
the night becomes a small journey
in my mind...
the image and the words are outstanding in their own right!
ReplyDeleteyou perfectly expressed how insomnia attacks us...sleepless, toss and turn, then morning comes, we feel just as empty...
ReplyDeletewell captured Sandy!
I loved the entire concept of your poem, and especially the end...exactly how it happens in reality...how all these sounds get magnified when we can't sleep....
ReplyDeleteMy favorite line:
"The dream comes?" :):)
Loved the images. I see myself in them. Maybe for a number of us, insomnia is the reason we write.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful expressions...you seem to be a magician..
ReplyDeleteOh Sandy, your poem is haunting me now. We all know the feelings but you have put them into words and it's so powerful.
ReplyDeleteWell said. Lovely work!
ReplyDeletegood poem!!
ReplyDeletethis is great! Love the rythm (wish I'd written this myself!)
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting me!
so very good
ReplyDeletemany thanks indeed ..
Thanks for being here.