In summertime dampness like a thief
Finds its way into the pores of old wood
And takes the past
To make a gift of it
To the present
This is not a noble gesture
But a thing that happens.
For me it is a happy accident.
It takes from the ruins of my inheritance
The fragrance of wood fires and coal
The distant scent of Christmas--
Wrapping paper and turkey grease
Pumpkin pies and apple--
My grandmother's ruby red lipstick,
The press of her kiss on my cheek
That said
I am glad you are here now.
The press of her kiss on my cheek
That said
I love you, child.
In summertime dampness like a thief
Takes from the ruins of my inheritance
The boxwood incense of nights that
Seem never to end
But are gone in the blink of an eye
I breathe in the bounty
Of summertime dampness
Sit with my grandfather over breakfast
One more time
And wonder when
My grandmother will awake
And join us.
I never quite know what to say.
We are quiet together.
I breathe.
I dream.
I blink
And it's over.
35 Comments
"I blink and it's over"
ReplyDeleteso true! That's how I feel about July.
"It takes from the ruins of my inheritance
ReplyDeleteThe fragrance of wood fires and coal
The distant scent of Christmas--
Wrapping paper and turkey grease
Pumpkin pies and apple--
My grandmother's ruby red lipstick,
The press of her kiss on my cheek"
I read and re-read the above.
BTW, I hate July. It is so humid here and doesn't get over any time soon.
clutch your fragrance to myself
I blink and its over. Awww. Lovely poem
ReplyDeleteLife is a bit like that. It is shooting by so quickly. I am a bit scared to blink too much! LOL!
ReplyDeleteLovely deep poem.
Nice.....Lovely set of verses and an amazing pic to suit it, in season!
ReplyDeleteI loved the last set of verses..It is as though you just read your mind to us!!
Beautiful..Keep writing so well..:)
This poem fills my senses and makes my heart strings vibrate. Beautiful and so alive.
ReplyDeletemodernism ( so called - ) seems to scowl at sentimentality _
ReplyDeletei like it a lot
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when it is created without the employment of obvious tools -
- as in this poem above .. many thanks ..
lovely poem that captures the essence of the past and your memories
ReplyDeleteThat is lovely and poignant.
ReplyDeletelovely --the link between fragrance and memory!
ReplyDeleteThis was absolutely lovely, and so poignant. Your memories were crystal clear, and I could feel myself right there with you, in the midst of your grandmother's and grandfather's loving presence. Beautiful! I, too, wrote about my grandmother.
ReplyDeleteThis is just lovely Sandy! What a great take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteHugs, G
PS: I wrote you a reply re: your McIntosh ???, over at MPP. Hope it's helpful.
Also, when you can correct, my name is misspelled over at OSI. Whenever, no big deal.
You've captured the briefness and depth of the experience here. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteWow! "Takes from the ruins of my inheritance". That is such a powerful, evocative image and sensory exploration. It's as if the dampness were the ethereal ghosts of your family. I love it!
ReplyDeleteKat
Love your photo - LOVE your verse! You are just TOO creative!!
ReplyDeleteJust wonderful, Sandy. Rub your eyes, it might come back!
ReplyDeleteMy Grandma was my refuge and my friend. She has been gone too, for ages.
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Lovely. Makes me feel like I'm 12 again-and it's summer.
ReplyDeleteit is so true that certain smells bring back memories!thanks for such a lovely poem My Dear Friend!
ReplyDelete“The press of her kiss on my cheek”
ReplyDeleteI never knew what to say either. I guess no words are needed.
Sandy your words are so beautiful and the picture tells a story.
ReplyDeleteSuch are the sweet fragrances of life ... enjoyed the read.
ReplyDeletethe distant scent of christmas <-- this line made me long for christmas
ReplyDeleteso sad & fleeting...yet, i want to wrap myself in these beautiful words
ReplyDeleteYour words are full of the spirit of memories and summer. I breathed it in as I read it.
ReplyDeleteThis spoke to so many closets in my heart which I have not visited for a long while..
ReplyDeleteYour poem reminds of opening up camp for the first time each summer, and there they are summer scents, the same forever.
ReplyDeleteThis one got me thinking, Sandy.
I breathe..I blink..and this work is Divine. Wonderful capture of fragrance!
ReplyDeleteTender and touching, a lovely tribute to time's fragrance.
ReplyDeleteI never wanted this poem to get over !!
ReplyDeleteSimple words evoke memories of treasured moments!
ReplyDeleteSimple words evoke memories of treasured moments!
ReplyDeleteThis is one of my favorite of yours, Sandy. I liked the repetition and the stuttered stops within the poem - making it a fitful dream.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteOk- Sandy- I admit it- this really made me tear up- alright- cry. This is so beautiful and it is so so true; blink and they are gone"...so many memories and special people...
ReplyDeleteLoved the picture- that is gorgeous!! I loved your nighttime photo shoot as well- I am intigued by the night and all it has to hold...
Sometimes...I get the feeling that life is but a blink and then it is gone...but it is wonderful when we have planted seeds during our time.
ReplyDeleteMy family left many seeds for me to enjoy as I have traveled on my journey in this space of time travel.
I hope I have done the same for future generations.
Thanks for being here.