Beautiful, simple, perfect. We have known rain, in an unusual way this early fall. Oh so beautiful, the rhythms of the the day into night, night into day... and rain... is this global change?
So much said so simply! Beautiful as always, Sandy!Sylvia
So much said, and so many interpretations that I can glean from your words. as for the fall in nature, I say bring it on!!! but that's just me. powerful word Sandy, very evocative.hugs, G
Simple and very lovely, Sandy!
whole lot said with so little written Sandy.
Such a betrayal I look forward at the end of each summer. That cold rain awakens my muse after it has been fried in the summer heat.
it' s coming. we have a winter cold front right now in northern utah and its so cold...brr!
Yes! Summer has slipped away before the the sun came up and fall has crept in. Sigh!I so loved summer!Love this one!HugsSueAnn
we have betrayed nature...yes!
It does feel like a betrayal at this time of the year. You capture that sadness so well.
I like this...I hadn't thought of fall as a betrayal, but it is. It tempts with warmth and betrays with chill
Beautiful words...you set your words together so perfectly. Nicely written Sandy.
true,we have air conditioner at day time,heater on at night.nature at the turn of the seasons does betray.
This is lovely, simple, direct. And here in the Sonora Desert, we call it blessed relief!
Fall is natural. Love it or not.Love this poem.
That's beautiful...Sandy..
So perfect- this seasonal betrayal- but I have to admit- THIS betrayal I do not mind one bit!
Thanks for being here.
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Beautiful, simple, perfect. We have known rain, in an unusual way this early fall. Oh so beautiful, the rhythms of the the day into night, night into day... and rain... is this global change?
ReplyDeleteSo much said so simply! Beautiful as always, Sandy!
ReplyDeleteSylvia
So much said, and so many interpretations that I can glean from your words. as for the fall in nature, I say bring it on!!! but that's just me.
ReplyDeletepowerful word Sandy, very evocative.
hugs, G
Simple and very lovely, Sandy!
ReplyDeletewhole lot said with so little written Sandy.
ReplyDeleteSuch a betrayal I look forward at the end of each summer. That cold rain awakens my muse after it has been fried in the summer heat.
ReplyDeleteit' s coming. we have a winter cold front right now in northern utah and its so cold...brr!
ReplyDeleteYes! Summer has slipped away before the the sun came up and fall has crept in. Sigh!
ReplyDeleteI so loved summer!
Love this one!
Hugs
SueAnn
we have betrayed nature...yes!
ReplyDeleteIt does feel like a betrayal at this time of the year. You capture that sadness so well.
ReplyDeleteI like this...I hadn't thought of fall as a betrayal, but it is. It tempts with warmth and betrays with chill
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words...you set your words together so perfectly. Nicely written Sandy.
ReplyDeletetrue,
ReplyDeletewe have air conditioner at day time,
heater on at night.
nature at the turn of the seasons does betray.
This is lovely, simple, direct. And here in the Sonora Desert, we call it blessed relief!
ReplyDeleteFall is natural. Love it or not.
ReplyDeleteLove this poem.
That's beautiful...Sandy..
ReplyDeleteSo perfect- this seasonal betrayal- but I have to admit- THIS betrayal I do not mind one bit!
ReplyDeleteThanks for being here.