Here from Earth's get-go,
Turtles get everything.
What I know of their story
Teaches me to live mine.
Tenured reptiles when the dinosaurs arrived,
They nevertheless hit the road
Rather than work with those overlarge
And possibly rambunctuous oafs,
Even if they were relatives.
They took that flying leap into the ocean,
Trading clawed toes and legs for sleek flippers,
The slow plod for the breast stroke,
The light of day for deep water,
And here they are today,
Bigger and better than our story,
Wiser in their silence
Than we are in our
Whatever you call it
That we don't know how to shut off.
(Conversation?)
On land or in the ocean,
They are at home in a shelter that
Grows from their own spine.
(Think about this:
Do you call your central nervous system home,
Or do you run for help at the slightest interruption
Of flow?)
Come out of your shell if you want
And when.
Go back in when you please
And feel completely safe
And completely yourself.
Live on.
It's good.
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Wonderful! I love it, Sandy! And so do the turtles! Have a wonderful tomorrow!
ReplyDeleteSylvia
the sea turtles are special to me.
ReplyDeletehave 2 on my skin.
for personal reasons,
they resonate deep.
So does your
excellent poem;
Sister
flipper.
Warm Aloha from Waikiki
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Turtles sure are inventive survivors.
ReplyDeleteAnd so cute too.:)
Wonderful writing and a brilliant thought, Sandy. I loved it. Cheers, Ruby
ReplyDeleteInteresting thoughts Sandy.
ReplyDeleteyes....interesting thoughts...!!
ReplyDeleteVery thoughtful piece. I guess I never thought of turtles this way. So true! Love those last two lines!
ReplyDeleteSea turtles - a great way to go with the shell prompt. And I like your take on flight or fight.
ReplyDeleteRichard
An excellent message.
ReplyDeleteThis is a wonderful piece of writing. Turtles may have been your inspiration, but the message is for all of us.
ReplyDeletewonderful metaphor! thanks for the inspiration Sandy and for giving us such a beautiful piece of writing to enjoy.
ReplyDeleteinteresting comparisons with our cousins the turtles...lol!
ReplyDeleteAh, but are turtles safe inside their shells? Interesting thoughts, Sandy, and well written.
ReplyDeletenot many of us can say we feel completely ourself Sandy. This wonderful on many levels engaging and informative but with a poetic sweetness, I love it!
ReplyDeleteWonderful write, Sandy!
ReplyDeleteThe story of sea turtles from a little'n to a big'n is amazing.
ReplyDeleteI love your expression of love for turtles. I've developed a new respect for them because of you. You wrote the evolution so beautifully, and I sense a challenge for us to be more like your loved ones. I'll try.
ReplyDeleteI love your turtle poem, Sandy. I also like to watch the turtle families basking in the sun on nice warm sunny days.
ReplyDeleteOf course the zoos have the large tough old geezers of a variety different from the neighborhood gang.
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Thank you for the nice prompt word too. It is interesting to see the differing takes on it. I like yours, a place of retreat and safety.
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I've always thought turtles were wise so I appreciate the story you've woven. Also, they are among my favorite animals especially the sea turtles!
ReplyDeleteI think I have something on similar lines to share. Some animals and even some people are at home always! Isn't it?
ReplyDeleteI love this. I am intrigued with turtles and I think you just told me why!
ReplyDeleteThanks for being here.