One Single Impression: (Illusion of) Sunset

SandyCarlson October 29, 2011
From August 8, 2011
Like a bobber
Linked to a baited hook

I rise and sink on water
That is home to hungry fish

As the earth spins round

And the sun stands still.

One Single Impression

Post a Comment

7 Comments

  1. Lisa at Greenbow8:12 PM

    What a funny thought that the sun is a bobber. Great!

    ReplyDelete
  2. Jim12:17 AM

    That's a pretty sunset picture, Sandy. And you poem is soooooo creative. Do you fish? I could never have thought of this hyperbole.

    I am guessing that your lights are back on and that you got dug out of the snow. Or did it all just melt away?

    I remember October snow storms back when I was living in New Hampshire. They weren't much fun but then the snow didn't stay long either.
    ..

    ReplyDelete
  3. Anonymous8:56 AM

    beautiful...!!!

    ReplyDelete
  4. Tammie Lee4:57 PM

    wonderful Sandy, depth and insight abound.

    ReplyDelete
  5. Myrna R.6:12 PM

    I like your poem. The imagery made me smile. The photo is lovely too.

    ReplyDelete
  6. aayanman7:48 AM

    Wonderful, enjoyed reading it.

    ReplyDelete
  7. Anonymous3:08 PM

    a deeper meaning ...interesting!!

    ReplyDelete

Thanks for being here.