A text message came in the middle of the night
In Portugese
From a stranger:
se vc adivinhar quem e te dou um presente...
(Guess who you are and give you a gift)
A little later, another invitation:
tomorrow good game at New Haven
7 pm YALE vs QUINNIPIAC
if u want to come
Before morning:
Que o que?
(What?)
I replied:
Wrong number.
What's ur name?
What's yours?
I asked first.
Minutes passed, and then:
Are you DIEGO,,
No.
??
Nor am I Estaban,
who had this number before me.
Ok, Sorry.
Guess who you are and give you a gift....
Note: This is a found poem based on some errant text messages that came my way from two different Connecticut phone numbers the other day. I felt like an unintentional voyeur as I read mail intended for someone else. I thought I would just ignore them, but then, they seemed like such nice invitations that it would be a same if the sender thought the intended recipient were ignorming him or her. So I sent the "wrong number" message. I was surprised when the other party responded with questions about who I am. It was so odd. I thought how we are anonymous on a cell phone; there's no tracing us (easily), and there's no real estate attached to the number beyond the area code--which really indicates where the account was opened, not where the subscriber lives. Still, I didn't want to tell my name. It was all very strange and very lonely. I hope whoever this giver of a gift is finds the right person.
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16 Comments
Interesting.
ReplyDeleteWhat next eh? Interesting take on the prompt for OSI too.
ReplyDeleteI thought of you when I saw this post:
http://noelmorata.blogspot.com/2011/09/black-sand-beach-at-punaluu-and-turtle.html
Hope all is well. Hugs, G
I always wonder when my cell phone rings-who it might be. The other night at 2:30 am=yes I was up fighting jet lag, I got a call from my bank that said my debit card had problems and push #1. Well I hung up cause I know I don't have any bank issues right now. But if I'd been asleep I would have panicked that someone was ill or hurt in the family. Your call or poem is hilarious!
ReplyDeleteI had a call from what I thought to be a nice old lady with alzheimers.
ReplyDeleteShe didn't know who she was talking to but we had the nicest conversation.I could just picture her sitting in a nice soft chair with a small round table with an english rose table cloth,drinking tea with biscuits.
She was lovely and then we said goodbye.
Hauntingly beautiful.
ReplyDeletedaily athens
Very interesting and sweet!
ReplyDeleteHa!
Hugs
SueAnn
that is original!!
ReplyDeleteVery unique and interesting!
ReplyDeleteI have had enjoyable conversations with wrong numbers before and I must admit I have made calls to wrong numbers myself...by accident.
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautifully created..
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting experience and i love how you wrote about it.
ReplyDelete'It was all very strange and very lonely. I hope whoever this giver of a gift is finds the right person.'
ReplyDeleteLets pray right person finds right gift, and gift finds right person - always.
Touching piece.
Fascinating messages here Sandy. I find this quite intriguing. Thanks for the inspiration as always.
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting story.;) I only once got a wrong text message and it was from someone I knew, but only as a work acquaintance and it not meant for me. I think it was a very explicit message (in Spanish) by a married man meant for his lover, hehe.;) I felt just like you but I did not respond, as I did not want to embarrass the man, who was (is) a colleague from abroad.;)
ReplyDeletexoxo
This was very interesting and I enjoyed reading it. Was not sure where it was going as I do not have a cell phone. I liked this very much.
ReplyDeleteMelanie
Hi Sandy ~~ These are the wrong numbers we like. They give us thinging material, this time prompt for a poem. Most times they are annoying.
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Thanks for being here.