What was a trolley track
Is a cinder path
A walkway
A straight and rigid line
Melting into the curves
That are the destiny
Of this landscape
Driving to work,
I often see a fox on that path
Coy, not furtive, in the dawn light
And the geese
Like feathered lords
Of the landscape
And deer
Stopping, strangely,
On that cinder path
The birds and squirrels
Of course
The warm touch
Of their bodies
Presses the road
Into memory
Before the high-stepping
Power walkers
Bear down on this bit of history
As if it were their birthright.
But those who were first up
Know the story
And how it will end.
It will:
25 Comments
It is interesting how a normally overlooked bit of our world can become an interesting slice of the day when contemplated.
ReplyDeletefun perspective of a day...
ReplyDeleteI do love your perspective -- as always! A reminder that there is beauty almost everywhere if we choose to see it! Happy 4th! Hope you have a wonderful weekend, Sandy!
ReplyDeleteSylvia
Most interesting.
ReplyDeleteI like so much the way you end your very nice poem, Sandy: with the word "Happily".
ReplyDeleteLovely
ReplyDeleteThat was a lovely little piece.
ReplyDeleteI love the cinder track..... makes me want to go down there.
Maggie X
Nuts in May
Beauty on the way! You have eyes for that. And heart that care for those who were first up!
ReplyDeleteSo lovely.
ReplyDeletethe roads let me think also..congrats for it
ReplyDeletehttp://graceolsson.com/blog/2010/07/simplicity/
To end happily. We can ask for nothing more.
ReplyDeleteyou see with good and loving eyes
ReplyDeleteHi Sandy, I like the way you weave nature and wildlife into your poem. It is those quiet, early morning, observations that add surprise and meaning to our lives. Telling us, there is more to life to be lived.
ReplyDeleteOh, what fantastic observations and an eye to catch the essentials.. no wonder you write so beautifully and inspire too, Sandy..Thanks!
ReplyDeletethank you for the journey.
ReplyDeleteI just saw a skunk wandering its path right outside my window. I might wait a wee bit before I go out to wander.
Lovely poem We did a lot of work today outside.:)
ReplyDeleteHave a happy Holiday:)
this has a different air about it .. i really enjoyed this.
ReplyDeleteHi Sandy;
ReplyDeleteI admire your being a keen observer of things around you!
A happy ending! Loved it!
great poem! particularly loved the majestic image conjured up by these words ...
ReplyDeletegeese
Like feathered lords
brilliant.
peace,
JP/deb
A pithy path, indeed! Lovely.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful place to be...it seems!
ReplyDeleteI REALLY enjoyed reading this work Sandy,well done!!!
ReplyDeleteoh, a happy ending. excellent.
ReplyDeleteA wonderfully written poem, and an excellent take on the prompt!
ReplyDelete-Weasel
Sandy, I love the lines, "and the geese, feathered lords of the landscape"! So aptly put! I grew up with the woods and the abandoned train tracks behind my house in CT. I often wandered those cindered paths and saw many of the same things you mention. This poem is a road back through my memory to my childhood and adolesence where I tore down this cindered path whenever I wanted to "run away from home." Once again, nicely done! Thanks!
ReplyDeleteThanks for being here.