Little
Leaves me trembling
Leaves me trembling
Anymore
But there is this:
Electrical storms and wind:
The this and that of nature
Slamming into the night
Tumbling like a heavy load
On
Every
Single
Thing.
The good and the beautiful
Are not spared
The weight of the assault.
Nor are the small
Or the sleeping
Or the innocent and warm
Or you and me.
This chain of events
Wraps itself around
Sleep,
Chokes it,
And moves on
Without mercy
Or even a sense
Of what mercy is.
34 Comments
Beautiful, if aching words, Sandy. You always manage to touch that sensitive place inside me. Have a wonderful weekend!
ReplyDeleteSylvia
my life is a never ending storm
ReplyDeletei live it right or wrong
So I go along
I sing a cheery song
Lovely read Sandy, thank you :)
ReplyDeleteVery moving poem!
ReplyDeleteMakes me feel like I can hear the wind howling at the window-you're such a good writer : )
ReplyDeleteThey scare me too.
ReplyDeletebeautiful Sandy, beautiful real and raw!
ReplyDeletesometimes life is like that too...
ReplyDeleteI like this poem, Sandy. Beautiful, true words.
ReplyDeleteI felt sorry this ever happened, even if it is a fiction.
ReplyDeleteTouching scene created.
Why not write a second part that will recreate everything better than before?? It will be interesting. and I will love it.
Fabulous poem!!! Well done!
ReplyDeleteHugs
SueAnn
always a perfect read on sundays. moving on without mercy ;(
ReplyDeleteI guess the storms don't leave me trembling too much in the night. I trembling over things like: who am I, what might have been, where am I going? I try not to second guess myself, always looking forward. But in those quiet moments of introspection, when the world and mind settle down; I wonder.
ReplyDeleteIt kind of resonated with me..
ReplyDeleterecipe of love brews well
Harshad said it.. Sandy, let us move back to practicing happiness..
ReplyDeleteYour writing is absolutely beautiful!
ReplyDeleteYes, life can be so stormy. Excellent, soulful words.
ReplyDeleteAll are left trembling after this poem. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteOh so true Sandy.
ReplyDeleteYou know, when I lived in Singapore they had censorship and it was so much easier to live and be happy and quiet there, not knowing, than to live here surrounded by info much of which is all false and lies.What r people thinking? Why not just be happy and be good to others? World would be a much nicer place to live.
I love the ending. Expertly executed!
ReplyDeleteThis is very nice for me. I loved to hear the mood changing all the while enduring the trembling.
ReplyDeleteFirst came trembling with fear and apprehension.
Next was some stronger action with fear now of danger.
Then you showed there could be no escape and that increased the apprehensive worry.
When the danger had passed then not even sleep could assuage the fear.
Finally quieter fear and trembling came with the realization of finality and chaos.
I can see it ending with a sobbing trembling, which would not stop.
How did I do coach?
I loved it. You are so good with descriptions of life's situations and feelings. I see most all were experiencing the emotions portrayed right along with the verse.
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Life is a series of storms, I think. Strong poem with lovely words.
ReplyDeleteunnerving,
ReplyDeleteso well written.
Sandy, I lived in tornado alley, I believe I've glimpsed some of what you write about. Wonderful poem, gets right to the heart of the matter, thanks.
ReplyDeletevery strongly worded poem.. wonderful..
ReplyDeleteI also "tremble" with these words...:)
ReplyDeleteI used to be brave,
ReplyDeletein the face of a storm,
but now, i tremble.
I love a good storm (but not the effects it can wreak) but our doggies tremble. Excellent poem Sandy--- we're kind of on the same page on this prompt. Have a great week- are you out for summer soon?
ReplyDeleteSounds like a tornado to me and that would leave me trembling also!
ReplyDeleteIsn't that what makes life?
ReplyDeleteWe wish not to have such storms but we can't get out of it, it comes and we are always left vulnerable!
as usual you deliver a stunningly great piece of writing my dear friend!
ReplyDeletenice progression.
ReplyDeletemyself I love an electrical storm, but fire engines make me jump, which makes no sense but there ya go. Bodies do what they will.
Strong poem...touched the soul indeed....
ReplyDeleteCheers
Geeta
http://www.itslifeblog.com/2010/05/16/recipe-of-life
Oh such beautiful and moving words. I think we all tremble in awe of this reality that God has given us. Great read.....
ReplyDeleteMelanie
Thanks for being here.